This week for literacy we have been learning about how to write a professional email. For this task we had a choice between making an email or a leaflet I chose to write an email because it was the easier task. When I wrote this email I think I did good because the teacher also liked it and after finishing this task my friend also said it was good as feedback he wrote “Really good! It has good facts to follow up your statements and also you have excellent statistics”. This is my fake email:
Kia ora MP,
My name is _____ and I am sending this email to propose on behalf of Christchurch East to revert school hours back to 9am-3pm. Christchurch East came up with this decision after seeing the following facts about why we should revert school hours.
The first reason is because after asking all of their children about the new school hours and some said “I hate it because I can’t do anything fun after school and i’m getting stressed out” and others say “school is too overwhelming they are making us do more work which is pressuring me”.
The second reason is because children can’t do any other activities so they can’t get any more knowledge about other activities. Some of the activities that we could benefit are:
- Self defense: because we need to protect ourselves from danger
- Swimming: if we ever need to swim at places or if we get caught in waves
- Cultural activities/ religious activities: because we still need to remember where we originated and to learn more about our culture like kapa haka
- Other sports that could keep our children active instead of staying inside a class for most of the day.
The list could go on about the activities our children need but the point is that our children need more than just academic performance.
The last reason that influenced Christchurch East to come up with this decision is because a parent commented about this that it will help balance their job of parenting their children and working but not all parents have their job aligned with after school hours and some don’t need to work. These are the reasons that influenced Christchurch East to propose a change.
We kindly propose you to go to the parliament and vote against this decision then Christchurch East will happily vote you again as our honorary MP.
Kind regards Christchurch East